Demon in the Mist - Part 2 - Latvian

Demon in the Mist - Part 2 - Latvian➻ [Download] ➸ Demon in the Mist - Part 2 - Latvian By Joseph P. Hradisky Jr. ➺ – Oaklandjobs.co.uk This is the second book in the series of the devastation created when the realms of science, and magic, were brought back together We continue with the forming of the quest party as it is getting read This is the Mist Epub Ù the second book in the series of the devastation created when the realms of science, and magic, were brought back together We continue with the forming of the quest party as it is getting ready to destroy the Black Stronghold, of the demon army, and save the human race from extinction. This author seems to do well with writing about his life, then his words flow and makes sense Although he needs to edit his products Not many of his shorts I can recommend, especially the SciFi.The Barrier A well told story, but not well written This should have been edited to catch the incorrect words and especially the missing commas, which would have made the story flow and read better Had to stop and mentally place commas to get the sentences to make sense The tour guide is a decent p This author seems to do well with writing about his life, then his words flow and makes sense Although he needs to edit his products Not many of his shorts I can recommend, especially the SciFi.The Barrier A well told story, but not well written This should have been edited to catch the incorrect words and especially the missing commas, which would have made the story flow and read better Had to stop and mentally place commas to get the sentences to make sense The tour guide is a decent person Good for a coffee break or a few minutes escape 4 What If A well told story, but not well written This time there s extra commas slowing down the flow of the story and none where needed Still needs editing for other reasons The dialog is a bit odd awkward in places slowing the story down It was a bit unrealistic, but possible, that the gun didn t go while pressed hard onto her head when the other gun was fired twice Otherwise, this isn t a bad story for a coffee break 3 Gentle Giant of the Glen A well told story, but not well written Joseph, you need to edit your books You tell interesting stories, but you mess them up with wrong word usage, lack of commas and other errors The action and dialog need work and there s not a smooth transition between scenes He s fighting Orcs and then checking out some woman s body parts, while their antagonists are talking amongst themselves How did the fights stop and get to this point But there sof this carelessness as the story goes on I stopped reading at the 41 percent page 41 The story doesn t flow or make sense, and the actions and dialog are poor This is a longer story, 99 pages I don t recommend this story to anyone 1 Kiss A well told, edited story Although about high school kids, the story was interesting 3 Forever A Love Story A short story about the author s life starting with his Air Force days in Memmingen, Germany and ending with his love at first sight and their marriage Interesting and well told Needs editing 4 Dan s Duck Duck and the bonus, The Garden, take up 69 percent the rest is boilerplate Needs editing Catching ducks with a fishing pole Didn t care for that, which happens accidentally I do like the fact the kid believed in don t kill it, if you re not going to eat it 3 The Garden Dan from Dan s Duck plants watermelon seeds and doesn t have good results Really, what was the purpose of this short, short 1 Incident at Fern Moss and Frozen Water Short Stories Very short shorts Both need editing.Fern Moss is not worth reading the ending didn t make any sense, unless there s another part to it somewhere 1 Frozen Water This is about the author at age eleven skating across a frozen lake Interesting story 3 Dragon s Fire This has the same characters as Incident at Fern Moss It comes before Fern in sequence, but I don t know if this is a series Dragon s is a better yarn than Fern, but still not worth reading 2 At The Gardens Gate Had a hard time getting into this SciFi short and quit at 41 percent Needs editing 2 Demon in the Mist This book is cut into three small and one longer parts Not well written or edited, with characters that aren t interesting or a storyline that matters Contains vulgar language I would have given two stars but for the fact the book was chopped into pieces, when the total length was less than 200 pages to start I can t recommend this read, even if free 1 Demon in the Mist Part 1 Melinda Less than 34 29 pages Difficult to get into boring and not clear, but vague Characters weren t interesting One book cut into three small and one longer pieces 1 Demon in the Mist Part 2 Samantha Less than 24 pages Picks up where part one ended Still couldn t get into the story or the characters There s a description of the story, which is one book cut into three small and one longer parts 1 Demon in the Mist Part 3 Oscar Less than 32 pages Picks up where part two ended Still couldn t get into the story or the characters The story is one book cut into three small and one longer parts 1 Demon in the Mist Part 4 The Depths of Hell Less than 100 pages Picks up where part three ended Still couldn t get into the story or the characters The story is one book cut into four small parts 1